Magic
When the moon is black and does not cast its enchanting glow,will you still love me?
Without its shimmering light upon my hair,
am I still beautiful?
Without the moon's magic to make us drunk with power,
will we still exist?
Magic
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will you still love me?
Without its shimmering light upon my hair,
am I still beautiful?
Without the moon's magic to make us drunk with power,
will we still exist?
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countrypoet commented on Magic
12-10-2009
- This is quite the provocative piece you have created with this concise,powerful and very memorable poem.Very well done!
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wildpendigus commented on Magic
06-26-2009
- I like this poem it is as beautiful as your smile, I think it tells a lot about you and I would turn this poem into a Pop Rock Song about medium speed I think it would be good, since I was and still are producer writer and musician, keep writing a masterpiece grecowong@yahoo.com
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WordSlinger commented on Magic
06-25-2009
- It takes power to question the night, and it's magic, and the message is very powerful, and beautiful. My answer would be yes to all three ?s
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06/25/2009
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cutbanksam commented on Magic
06-24-2009
- I think it is a very interesting thought.. Well written. Actually, it is a beautiful work.. I like it very much. Keep writing.
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06/25/2009
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BDIsernhagen commented on Magic
06-24-2009
- mystical, dare I say "magic"al? A great read, are you challenging typical poetic imagery? Debasing poetry in a poem? Debasing those who debase poetry? maybe not, but it got me thinking. great write, sincerly!
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06/26/2009
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