MY STEPS

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    MY STEPS

     And life takes another step.
    Pull down my favorite star out of the sky;
    and still I must go on.

    In my mind, there are dreams,
    this is the place where my soul and heart meet.
    That is were my lady lives.
    Take her away and still I must go on.

    We define what makes our lives have meaning;
    what makes our lives joyous,
    what makes our lives successful
    what makes our lives worth living!

    take it all away;
    still I must go on.

    For no man or standard defines whom,
    or what I am.

    God and I alone,
    decides that!!

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    deanne commented on MY STEPS

    08-18-2012

    I think this is my favorite. I love it. It sounds a little like my life, people trying to define you from the outside in. I'm so glad that GOD IS NOT A MAN. OTHERS SEE A SHEPARD BOY! ( David), BUT GOD SEES A KING. BE ENCOURAGED, KEEP SHARING THE GIFT!!
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    Wakeitha commented on MY STEPS

    04-17-2012

    Beautiful poem my friend well written. I felt what you was talking about so it had excellent meaning. One thing I ask Why you start the poem out with and.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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