MY STEPS

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    MY STEPS

     And life takes another step.
    Pull down my favorite star out of the sky;
    and still I must go on.

    In my mind, there are dreams,
    this is the place where my soul and heart meet.
    That is were my lady lives.
    Take her away and still I must go on.

    We define what makes our lives have meaning;
    what makes our lives joyous,
    what makes our lives successful
    what makes our lives worth living!

    take it all away;
    still I must go on.

    For no man or standard defines whom,
    or what I am.

    God and I alone,
    decides that!!

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    deanne commented on MY STEPS

    08-18-2012

    I think this is my favorite. I love it. It sounds a little like my life, people trying to define you from the outside in. I'm so glad that GOD IS NOT A MAN. OTHERS SEE A SHEPARD BOY! ( David), BUT GOD SEES A KING. BE ENCOURAGED, KEEP SHARING THE GIFT!!
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    Wakeitha commented on MY STEPS

    04-17-2012

    Beautiful poem my friend well written. I felt what you was talking about so it had excellent meaning. One thing I ask Why you start the poem out with and.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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