Taken

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    • is doin some Solitary Thinkin-- Lee Ann Womack

    Taken

    I sat there just watching,
    I saw you walking in.
    No one seemed to bother,
    you were tattered and torn.
    My heart ached at the sight of you.
    I searched your deepening eyes
    I sat and saw.
    And I stood and sighed.
    Uncomfortable in your presence
    The people they just left.
    I couldn't define your essence.
    Something about you-- blessed.

    A worried brow
    old and knowing eyes
    Searching for us
    yet we despised.
    You know our hearts
    you knew the hurt,
    a brother here?
    I saw that look

    As you shed your jacket
    revealing beautiful light
    They knew your presence
    and on their knees in fright.

    They knew just what they did.
    Igoring your needing glance
    no heartfelt gesture
    no loving hand
    they felt the sorrow
    as you raised your hands

    Spread across and fastened tight
    the blood that trickled down
    pain endured with all your might
    For our sake you were bound

    The cross you bore
    for our souls to soar,
    a token of your heart
    the reason your life was for

    Beautiful you became
    in an instant loving light
    defeating darkness
    and restoring sight.

    You rose from the ground
    with a gentle blessed wind
    your cloak wrapped 'round
    your body healed
    In awe I watched you
    an army of angels
    surround you.
    A deep breath,
    I see myself,
    I catch a glimpse
    of the old beaten earth
    Taken away from all the sorrow
    In eternity
    no time is borrowed.

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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