tonight is the night

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    i wrote this with every intention to die
    but
    i actually ended up meeting someone that night and i decided to give him a chance
    and
    were still together he has turned my life around and made me a new person thanks manny
    i havent had thoughts like that since the minute i met him
    hes my whole world
    my angel that saved me :)
    this is about my ex that used to beat me the last time i saw him he told me he was going to kill me but the cops took him to jail

    im so gald to be a new person now

    tonight is the night

     tonight is the night that i will take my life
    i cant live anymore my heart was taken and shattered
    he used to take my wrists and cut them
    he would clench up his fist pull back and punch me
    he would scream in my face and call me worthless
    i cant get the memories out of my head
    its my freashmen year im going to homecoming tonight
    so i will go out and maybe meet someone........... :)
    but i doubt it  :(
    so i will come home fill the tub with water
    have rose petals in the water
    candles lit all over
    dye the water red with my blood
    then .....
    i will dround myself
    i will never feel pain again
    nor will i walk this earth again
    for tonight will be the night that i will take my life

    october 6th 2007

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