RIP RICHIE

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RIP RICHIE

here i lay on the grass & stare at the stars
in breathe in & close my eyes
i flash back to the days that we shared together
all the laughter and the smiles that we shared all the memories that were made
THEN.....
the most horrible memory comes to me
the one that i never want to think of
the day my world shattered beneath my feet
the day you left me
i remember the funeral it was cold windy and raining
suddenly my body shivers like it did that day
I'm now crying
i look back up at the stars and i see a shooting star
i feel like your with me now so i whisper i love you Richie and your the best brother ever
and i will always love you and you will always be in my heart

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UnworthyFather commented on RIP RICHIE

06-19-2009

What a wonderful, beautiful poem that shows the limitless love that you have for your brother. I will not say 'had', because that love will never die, and Richie will live forever in your heart. You are in my prayers, ilymanny. May God bless you with a joy unspeakable. Marcus

jademelissa74 commented on RIP RICHIE

06-19-2009

True love, unforgettable love! A beautifully written poem. The reader can feel the love that you had for Richie and the pain that you have now for the loss. He was a blessed young man to have someone that loved him the way you do.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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