my whole world

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    my whole world

    he came into my life ever so quickly
    & ever so sweetly
    when i first saw him my heart sank
    when we first spoke i fell in love
    when we touched i felt nothing could go wrong
    when we first kissed i knew it was forever
    i love him so much and i couldnt ask for anyone better
    thats how he came into my life ever so quickly
    and ever so sweetly

    i love u manny

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    Chaos128 commented on my whole world

    06-19-2009

    A direct declaration and one that would be impossoble to ignore. You have a unique voice, Ilymanny. I'm sure Manny knows it,too.

    UnworthyFather commented on my whole world

    06-19-2009

    A great poem that conveys the love you feel for your 'soulmate'. May God ever bless your relationship with him. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

    UnworthyFather

    06/19/2009

    It just dawned on me...ilymanny (I love you Manny)!!!

    ilymanny

    06/19/2009

    yes we have a very strong love and hes so amaing i couldnt ask for anyone else

    ilymanny

    06/19/2009

    yeah thats what it means lol silly

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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