a day with nature

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this was wrote for my friend erika

a day with nature

rain drops innocently fall on my face
only too roll off and be dried by the sun as i look up to the sky i see beautiful colors forming
a rainbow that fills the whole sky with confidence
it lets me know that through all the bad there is good to come
that everything will get better
as this rainbow forms.....
i look over at the flowers that were devistated by the storm
i see that they have perked upand are now blooming again smileing at the sun
it lets me know that you can fall down and be at your worst and still get up and try again
the river water is calming down
so i go lay by its side
i think about all the things that nature taught me
and as i fall asleep i whisper
thank you god
goodnight

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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