Too Emotional

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    Too Emotional

    Too emotional...
    What does that mean?
    I can't figure it out,
    without some help.
    Somebody please tell me,
    what I did wrong...
    What he wanted,
    that I didn't do,
    that I couldn't give,
    that I wouldn't be.
    Tell me how,
    how to make him love me,
    how to make him want me.
    For who I am now,
    what I am right here.
    In my heart,
    in my head.
    Where I can't change it,
    where I won't change it.
    If he doesn't love me for me,
    when I love him for who he is,
    including his flaws.
    Then my love is not enough,
    not enough to hold him here,
    not enough to make this last.
    So tell me please...
    What is too emotional?

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    SidneyStokes commented on Too Emotional

    06-29-2011

    This poem was amazing. You express a feeling that clearly comes from a deep part of your talent. Great job!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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