Too Long

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It's tough when a friend falls, but it's much much harder when it's your blood.

Too Long

For too long he has been gone
His mind has said, 'so long'
For too long he's pierced his veins
Sacrified his brain
A sickness in his veins...

Far too many dark chapters
Each one darker than the last
It's been harder all this year
Then any in the past
Then any in the past

~~~

For too long he has been lost
What's important has been tossed
For too long he has done wrong
How to cure him of this?
Oh, how to cure him of this?...

I have no power this endless night
To illuminate his light
Has it burnt out what once was bright
With no hope in sight?
But that can't be right

~~~

What the hell is going on?
He's lost it all, it's been too long
A demon sings a sickly song
Sayin', 'here's where he belongs'
But I know that is wrong...

Each new day all I pray
He finds his soul to lead his way
Up until now it has been gone
and it's been too long
It Has Been Too Long!

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EyesOfRain commented on Too Long

09-20-2012

Aww. I believe we have talked about this issue already, so you know I can relate here. This makes me sad.

EyemMatt

09/21/2012

Thanks. Thankfully we reached the light at the end of that one dark, dark tunnel. It's good to know that my blood knows that it wasn't just him that was going through it. I was right there with him.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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