A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing

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    A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing

     ©dah

    ©dahlusion

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    To read this poem, contact my publisher Stillpoint Press

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    thank you,
    dah

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    LenaM commented on A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing

    01-05-2011

    and I messed up the comment too :( this has NOT been a good day
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    dahlusion

    01/05/2011

    I got it... thank you...

    LenaM commented on A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing

    01-05-2011

    dah I'm brought to tears yet again and yet... I am in a very dark place right now and this is a good thing I was beginning to fear I had died completely inside. "I watched you that day keeping yourself graceful, a blue tear frozen and your delicate wings folded, tucked in, and pulled back from me. I watched you, your lips trembling and mine pale," the longing, the pain all beautifully illustrated, it bends my mind that such pain and longing can be made to have beauty, oh I'm mucking this up badly and I can only hope you understand what I'm struggling to say
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    dahlusion

    01/05/2011

    this is one of my favorites... thank you and live on...

    PoeticBrit commented on A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing

    01-05-2011

    wow. that's all i can really say. such realization hit so hard. love it. saving it into my faves
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    dahlusion

    01/05/2011

    thank you...

    blackfootlady commented on A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing

    10-30-2010

    Oh yes.I enjoyed this One.I've had several friends threw out my life that I miss too.Somehow this poem connected me with that.Excellent write-You made me yearn as well for friends that past. God Bless-Black
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    dahlusion

    11/01/2010

    thank you...

    devaamido commented on A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing

    10-30-2010

    My God Dah, this is the most delicately poignant expression of nostalgic yearning I've ever read.
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    dahlusion

    11/01/2010

    I am honored by this comment, and thank you...

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