Bored

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Just got bored needed a new poem. Here is the finished product!!!!

Bored

Simply staring into space
a slack expression on my face
Eyes glazing
mind hazy
Just not interested.
Her pencil scratching
his foot tapping
Tongue clicking
drool dripping
Trying to stay awake.
Only ten short minutes left
time has been robbed by the time theft
I'm glad 'cause now it's finally done
so long, goodbye, I've got to run!

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Teardrops commented on Bored

07-31-2010

Oh have i been there but a good poem brings me out of it .Loved this poem great write Marie

Rhymer commented on Bored

07-31-2010

Still get into the dazed state you so excellently describe. Nice poiece.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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