Can I Get It?????

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    Separating What I Want from an Insatiable Need........

    Can I Get It?????

    If I want it …

    Can I get it?

    If I want it…

    Will she let me?

    But once I got it…

    Do I still want it?

    If she let’s me…?

    What else can I get?

    Will I keep it ?

    Can I improve it?

    Does she want it?

    Just cuz she let’s me…

    Now that I got it…

    Why am I still sweating?

    Gambling she can keep me…

    I bet I can get it again?

    On to the next getting…

    Already forgotten that I can get it…

    How could I, she gave it to me?

    Is she happy that she gave it?

    Or has she given up on getting back?

    Retracing getting what was gotten…

    Did I waste what I had?

    Will she want to go back?

    Before I got it, I did want it????

    Now I got to fight for what is given….

    I remember when I had that….

    Now all I got is the question….

    Why didn’t I keep it?

     

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    Sx9 commented on Can I Get It?????

    01-15-2011

    life rolls,get it yes,,the i get it rolls again and the sun shines again and so we continue to get it even when we don't want it or need it we get it, so i ask when will you drop it when it get too much.....
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    SILKYTWEED

    01/16/2011

    Good question, when it has become mundane....is when I'm done and will refrain....thanks for reading (smile)

    HarverTomsson commented on Can I Get It?????

    12-20-2010

    This one reeks of testosterone, just like the men's health club lockers. But it's all good. Nice to sense a familiar scent from time to time that hasn't been bought at some perfume counter. LOL Poets don't always have to channel the inner child, or the feminine side. Harv
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    SILKYTWEED

    12/20/2010

    You are absolutely right...there should be no limits to tasteful channeling (smile)..Thanks so much Harv for commenting!! lol

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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