BATTLE OF RELEVANCE

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    BATTLE OF RELEVANCE

    Where is this place, that I have been to before
    But yet I still feel displaced
    It is a race that is quite “human”,
    For no other animal could ever keep pace,
    At birth I recall a ready, set, go,
    An egotistical order bellowed from society’s decree, and
    there in lies the challenge of
    Outlasting my brother racing along side of me
    A quick look over my
    Shoulder is where he will be
    As he turns and also notices me
    We are all brothers is divine,
    But to step over you is how
    I will climb, as it often
    Becomes necessary to
    Fight off those who are left behind
    That is not maturity as you
    Stretch out to cross the finish line
    Of material wealth, more
    Like a decline of spiritual health
    As we constantly jockey for
    Position in the Battle for Relevance!
    You say why don’t you go back to visit,
    To show that you are still with it,
    But when I show everybody has
    Gone on to different phases and I’m
    Left alone as if I was the only root
    Aboveground in a tall tree’s shade
    So you tell me to come to the light
    And fight your fight, cuz we can
    Always use a good brother of
    Your might in the Battle of
    Relevance!
    I decide to leave your side for
    What I truly desire, for what I
    Believe will help me to achieve
    Relevance,
    So here I am in this new tribe,
    With this sorta, kinda, different vibe,
    But I still remain lonely as I scribe
    My hearts tears called a Battle of Relevance!

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    MalikPeterson commented on BATTLE OF RELEVANCE

    10-23-2009

    This one seems like it has some subliminal concepts. I felt as if you were talking to the race...which is always racing to get ahead by tearing down members of the same society. Alluding to the fact that we will remain relevant or obtain relevance at any cost. I like the short quick lines. Every word is displaying its own importance. I have a shovel...and I dig this piece.

    SILKYTWEED

    10/26/2009

    Exactly Malik, exactly....Thanks

    akayakar commented on BATTLE OF RELEVANCE

    03-28-2009

    This was pretty intersting. Well done. I like the way you think. . . very deep. Isn't it amazing where your brain can take you?

    SILKYTWEED

    06/18/2009

    Thank you, the brain is a pretty large space, so much it contains many multi-verses....(smile) Thanks again!

    ReRe commented on BATTLE OF RELEVANCE

    02-11-2009

    very nice! It's odd that my father and I were just having this conversation yesterday. It is a hard race sometimes..that's for sure.

    SILKYTWEED

    06/18/2009

    That it can be, sometimes your running without realizing it...(smile) Thanks

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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