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This was the challenge that I issued forth for the 25th of June.  The challenge was haybales.


Majestic and massive
They tower
Over the beaten path walked
For generations
By one man
His son
And soon his grandson

A conspiracy they stand
At attention
To salute the commander and chief
Who bids
On their freedom
Quite cheaply
Jus as his predecessors before him

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spbsdude commented on Conspiracy


i used to haul hay for my Dad and hated every minute of it because of an extreme hay fever. But there the stacks of hay would stand and gaze down at me, an ant among the giant stacks. My Dad was the commander and chief, and not always easy to live with, but I got through it. Thanks for the write and the memory.

nini2323 commented on Conspiracy


well isn't that interesting I read the poel before the explanation and a thousand things came to mind, haybales not in there lol good job

hdmac commented on Conspiracy


It is like an animated movie script or something like that.

Shan commented on Conspiracy


heart felt write for the true patriots as soldiers..... Is there any other way to serve the nation other than this proud job?... very good read...a 50 from me......

Chi commented on Conspiracy


yes this poem get s rating of 35. Chi.

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DestinedQueen’s Poems (21)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Pain of My Conviction 5
Badge of Shame 3
Parallel 49
The Makings of a Dream 23
Dreams of a Lazy Mind 15
I Bleed 18
Conspiracy 15
Cardboard Safe 14
Night Dance 17
Losing My Sanity 10
Behind the Curtain 5
Existence of the Non-Existence 3
Death of a Poet 7
Beautiful Death 4
A Million Miles to Home 2
Evolution of Emotion 5
These Words of Mine 1
This Cage 6
Shutting You out 2
The Fall of the Ivory Tower 2
Afraid 9