Dreams of a Lazy Mind

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This is the poem for the third weekly challenge that I fell behind on due to being busy.  Finally had some time to crank it out and I'm sooo happy I did.  I apologize to all that participated in this challenge for the late arrival.

Dreams of a Lazy Mind

Silently
My observer watches
Movements
Made by me
Squinting 
Large green eyes

My observer dozes
Falls
Into deep slumber
Purring
She dreams happily
Lazily
For the world
Belongs
Completely to her

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WolfLord commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind

10-29-2009

This is Awesome. The flow is perfect. The images are crisp. Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

aliciagall commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind

10-08-2009

I like this. Simple like a thought that we can relate too.

laydbak1 commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind

08-08-2009

Now, I liked this... No, I really like this.... You sucked me right in, with just a few choice words... My cat does the same thing.... Great write...

Artie commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind

08-02-2009

Nice -I like this. Short & sweet, nice kitty lol - 10 from me

daniel081180 commented on Dreams of a Lazy Mind

07-26-2009

queen you always do a great job painting a picture no matter how short or long your poems are great job babe keep writing and i'll keep reading... :)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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