Night Dance


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Night Dance

Dance with me under the stars
On sun-warmed walkways
In the cool of night
Cold feet-toe curling ecstasy
   When no one's around

Each--tentative--graceful move
Each gentle grasp of solidity
Followed by wishes on shooting stars
               In our eyes

Pushing, pulling, penetrating
Body, mind, and soul
Like the moon and tide
I follow-yet in my own way

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RandyFrost commented on Night Dance


i love this poem....its so erotic and to the point...a man that can lead well i guess is every girls dream?

marxred commented on Night Dance


quite sensuous DQ! touch right down to the toe curling ecstacy! very very nice! dennis

Mangus commented on Night Dance


the ability to pack a large amount in few words is rare. You have wonderful gift and you use well

Hanna commented on Night Dance


I think this is more romatic, and passionate yet in an innocent way. It is erotic in the lightest sense of the word/meaning. It also enlightens me on teh esssence of being tru to oneself. I like it

daniel081180 commented on Night Dance


i have to say what a great read and so much said in so little time. Very great job i will definatly read more great job.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

DestinedQueen’s Poems (21)

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Badge of Shame 3
Parallel 49
The Makings of a Dream 23
Dreams of a Lazy Mind 15
I Bleed 18
Conspiracy 15
Cardboard Safe 14
Night Dance 17
Losing My Sanity 10
Behind the Curtain 5
Existence of the Non-Existence 3
Death of a Poet 7
Beautiful Death 4
A Million Miles to Home 2
Evolution of Emotion 5
These Words of Mine 1
This Cage 6
Shutting You out 2
The Fall of the Ivory Tower 2
Afraid 9