Hard to Believe

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    Hard to Believe

     Her friends say she's pretty
    Her mom says she's cute
    Her best friend says she's beautiful
    But she finds it unbelievable

    She talks to everyone she sees
    She listens to their problems
    She hands out pieces of herself
    Leaving her heart on the shelf

    No problem to big for her to solve
    No matter what she helps her friends
    No one sees the pain inside
    Pain she always tries to hide

    Everyone tells her she's cool
    Everything she does is for them
    Every once in a while she smiles
    And she feels okay for a while

    She looks at her best friend
    She considers her life
    She thinks about what she loves
    All her blessings from above

    Is that so hard to believe?

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    breezes commented on Hard to Believe

    09-18-2009

    kinda melancholy but at the same time thought provoking.
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    jscottkemp commented on Hard to Believe

    09-17-2009

    That is not hard to believe at all. "She hands out pieces of herself / Leaving her heart on the shelf" All the best poems come from somewhere deep inside, I think.
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    MLynna

    09/17/2009

    Isn't that what makes it art? :p

    Mandi commented on Hard to Believe

    09-15-2009

    she sounds like me unsure of herself, very insightful nicely done
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    MLynna

    09/15/2009

    Thanks! That was the main idea of the story. :)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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