Pieces

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    • MLynna
    • is unsure if the poetry I've written lately is too angsty/private/poorly written to post or not. Hmmmm.

    Pieces

    Pieces of my heart rattle around
    In a box made of expectations
    And hopes that won't come true
    None of it's real, it won't last
    This doesn't count for anything
    Because I know it's not real

    So I handed you my heart
    With some duct tape and glue
    You put it back together
    Better than before it broke
    It's not perfect yet but it's
    Getting better all the time

    Did you know I'm addicted
    I can't help thinking about you
    Always mentally lingering
    Wondering how long it will last
    Waiting for it to fall apart
    Expecting it to break again

    But I'm beginning to think that
    Maybe this time it won't end
    Like it should, and always has
    Will it last or die, pass or fail
    Who can tell what is to come
    For now I'll take what I can get

    You fixed my broken pieces
    Put them back together
    You filled my empty holes
    And made them better than
    Before you came along and
    Showed me what I can be

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    jscottkemp commented on Pieces

    09-17-2009

    "Pieces of my heart rattle around in a box made of expectations" - wow - pretty evocative & it will strike a resonant chord with a lot of people. This is a good one, IMHO.

    MLynna

    09/17/2009

    IMHO? *is confused* You'll have to translate that into young person speak for me. :p

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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