Spark (short)
My funeral pyre is the fireSpark (short)
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mamasan commented on Spark (short)
11-08-2009
- It takes a special talent to say so much in so few words. A talent that has escaped me both in real life conversations and in poetry. That is why I make sure I meditate each morning and night....so I can vacate all the nonsense that dances in my head and I mean that literally. StandingBear I admire and enjoy your talent which brings messages of a tall order, indeed.
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11/08/2009
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Stryx commented on Spark (short)
10-23-2009
- Few in words - vast in meaning. That seems to be how you express our lives.
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10/23/2009
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alexander316 commented on Spark (short)
10-19-2009
- phoenix rise most assuredly through your simple ways...poetry so beautiful...yummy
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10/19/2009
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Grito commented on Spark (short)
10-18-2009
- Brushfire cleanses lost in fire. Trees did witness flame. Patterns etched into the wind. Sow the dawn eve so inflamed.
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10/19/2009
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graceladymn commented on Spark (short)
10-18-2009
- Majestic in its simplicity and says it all at the same time. Thank you for sharing and may I say, let it burn for the phoenix of soul yet arises.
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10/18/2009
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