Terminal Girl

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Terminal Girl

Violet eyes

 

Full of sadness

 

Tears she cries

 

On the verge of madness

 

Her auburn hair

 

In disarray

 

She only wants

 

To find the way

 

The sun is too bright

 

Darkness her friend

 

She sits and she wonders

 

When is the end

 

The circles under her eyes

 

Tell of her sorrow

 

And she wonders if she wants…

 

Another tomorrow

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kdarcy commented on Terminal Girl

08-11-2010

Nice read, short and sweet, to the point, a shame too mny can relate to this. Be well

soulwriter commented on Terminal Girl

06-05-2010

A short story summing up all too many lives that are lived without being able to find or rediscover the happiness that must come from within. This piece is complete - the visual picture to the picture that is painted through words up the minds of the attentive readers! 10

Papa commented on Terminal Girl

05-28-2010

Is the end always bitter? Maybe not if you are looking for it. Darkness is not a good place to hide, with no light, it's to hard to find your way out. I like sad poems. I don't know why.

Chaos128 commented on Terminal Girl

05-12-2010

A moment of deep melancholy out of... how many? Great way to make the reader aware of a whole world of circumstances that isn't seen.

DeepEclipse commented on Terminal Girl

03-12-2010

Yes darkness never gets full. Never gets sated. Vicious cycle of circulating circles. Bending the soul's will in a never ending stillness. Good vent.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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