Terminal Girl


Terminal Girl

Violet eyes


Full of sadness


Tears she cries


On the verge of madness


Her auburn hair


In disarray


She only wants


To find the way


The sun is too bright


Darkness her friend


She sits and she wonders


When is the end


The circles under her eyes


Tell of her sorrow


And she wonders if she wants…


Another tomorrow

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kdarcy commented on Terminal Girl


Nice read, short and sweet, to the point, a shame too mny can relate to this. Be well

soulwriter commented on Terminal Girl


A short story summing up all too many lives that are lived without being able to find or rediscover the happiness that must come from within. This piece is complete - the visual picture to the picture that is painted through words up the minds of the attentive readers! 10

Papa commented on Terminal Girl


Is the end always bitter? Maybe not if you are looking for it. Darkness is not a good place to hide, with no light, it's to hard to find your way out. I like sad poems. I don't know why.

Chaos128 commented on Terminal Girl


A moment of deep melancholy out of... how many? Great way to make the reader aware of a whole world of circumstances that isn't seen.

DeepEclipse commented on Terminal Girl


Yes darkness never gets full. Never gets sated. Vicious cycle of circulating circles. Bending the soul's will in a never ending stillness. Good vent.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

calliope’s Poems (39)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Terminal Girl 8
Sailors Girl 4
Ritual Sacrifice 1
Prelude to a Kiss 6
Madness 3
Splintered Fragments 4
Lillith II 2
Addicted 1
Wide Open 3
Sandman's Bride 5
I Walk On 4
Quicksand 1
A Walk Into The Sun 8
Remember When 7
Clarity 3
Riding the Night 6
Perfect Fit 5
Rain of Feathers 5
Cause of Death 5
Be Still 4
Mummy 3
Crying Inside 2
An Ode to Roger Rabbit 2
Winter Retreat 2
Swallowed By Darkness 7
Lillith 6
Les Neuf Soeurs[The Nine Sisters] 6
Fated Truth 6
Nymphomania 6
Come,Sweet Prince... 3
Eternal Lover 4
A Muse's Delusions 6
Out Of Body Experience 4
A Token Of A Dream 5
Lay Me Down Upon Petals 8
To Surrender 4
No Houdini 2
Windblown 5
Smoking Shakespeare 7