Torn Apart

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    Torn Apart

    Till death do us part,
    is what you told me from the start.
    But it seems as though
    your heart got smart
    as it tore me apart.

    When you looked at me
    your eyes used to glow.
    When you touched me
    my blood didn't want to flow.
    You used to hold me
    like you'll never let go.
    we used to dance
    swaying to and fro.

    When your around me
    my heart just grows.
    My mind is strong,
    my body is weak,
    now all I need is for you,
    to keep me on my feet.




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    Blushes commented on Torn Apart

    03-19-2009

    very nice but should have a different tittle

    rollerderby commented on Torn Apart

    12-04-2008

    Very well done my dear, I can read the pain in the words you've written. But kkep in mind, you're young and you will have many oppurtunities to experiences of life, both good and bad. Only one small comment on the poems flow, use your heart to feel t

    Phoenix9 commented on Torn Apart

    11-28-2008

    very nice

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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