Short letter

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    Short letter

    Here is a letter, written just for you.
    I love you more than I can say,
    I wish so much you feel the same way.
    Watching waves rumble over the sand,
    Just you and me walking hand in hand.

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    Weatherstone commented on Short letter

    12-06-2008

    Short, but very well thought out. I like it! I think poetry should be language distilled and condensed with as little "language white noise" and unnecessary words as possible.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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