All alone

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  • Sadness

    All alone

    As I sit here alone,
    wondering when you'll come home.
    I listen to the breeze
    that flows within the trees.
    The whispers from the sea
    wondering where I'll be.
    When my world comes crashing
    and I fall to ground.
    Will you give a pound
    letting me know your around?

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    phatgirl commented on All alone

    07-17-2009

    Once again you speak from the mouth ,but write from your heart.

    Weatherstone commented on All alone

    12-06-2008

    One of your better ones. Once again, for the brevity, clarity, and use of picture words to capture the imagination.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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