Its all up to you...

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    Its all up to you...

    You say that you love me,
    then why are you leaving me?

    I can't make you forget the past,
    I can't tell you what the future holds in store.

    I know the past affects the present,
    and the present to the future.

    Now its up to you to either let the past go
    or make it your future.

    You said you want to die,
    and I asked why?

    You told me to stop the hurt and the pain
    that you feel you cause upon others.

    Did you stop to understand the amount of hurt and pain
    you may bring by cummiting something like that?

    I told you I love you
    and yes it true.
    But now its all up to you.

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    Weatherstone commented on Its all up to you...

    12-06-2008

    I like the idea going on here just think it could use some more work to refine it and zero it on its subject. Did you mean to use "cummiting" instead of "committing"?

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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