Heaven & Promises

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    Heaven & Promises

    If there is no heaven,
    then how is there a hell?
    If there are no promises,
    then how is there lies?
    I always thought that promises
    aren't ment to be broken.
    But many say they are.
    So how can you make is promise
    if you're intentions are only to break it?
    Just like holding someones' heart
    in the palm of your hand.
    Are you the one to heal it
    or will you be the one to break it?
    He has my heart and everything it holds
    would he just leave it out in the cold?
    I tried to understand how I just handed it to him,
    but it seems as though it has fell,
    Will he be the one to tend to its needs,
    Or will I have to beg and plead.

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    Weatherstone commented on Heaven & Promises

    12-06-2008

    I think there is more in the poem! You're not done with it. It's possible that you have two related ideas that can be developed here. Some spelling errors to pay attention to.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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