stop ruining my life

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    stop ruining my life

    Never let yourself get lock down
    from the people that turn your smile to a frown.

    It's a mistake thats been made
    that just won't fade.

    Always stand your ground
    to keep that smile from a frown.

    Many say the best things come to the ones that wait,
    then what happens when you just wait to long?

    Will they ever stop ruining
    whatevers left of my life,
    be for the time has where nothings said nor done,
    and all those chances get thrown out the door
    and fall to hit the floor?

    When will they realize
    that lifes to short to waste?
    By the time they get that taste
    it'll all just be too late.
    My time will come sooner then expected
    from all this depression that they've put me through.

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    wildpendigus commented on stop ruining my life

    05-30-2009

    I feel that that this poem could easily become a song, with a little work with a producer, it would be a very nice song with the knowlege I have of music, since I've seen artist make it and leave and etc. etc. Widpendigus

    Spacer commented on stop ruining my life

    01-29-2009

    Nice poem...Simple witha worth while message ...Nicely done

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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