Love can be so weak..

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    Love can be so weak..

    There's a knife in my heart, slowly ripping it apart,
    I should've known from the start, your intentions where to part,
    the feelings within my heart.

    I should've known when you told me you loved me,
    I should've known when you told me you care,
    that your intentions were to never be there.

    Things started off so good, then I noticed where she stood.
    At the window of your heart, like a shadow of a shark.
    Waiting to tare us apart.

    Then she got smart, as she found that part.
    To the bandage of your heart, as she slowly pried it part.

    Athough I gottah say, I still want you to stay.
    But it seems as though, your being tossed to and fro.
    All I want is for our hearts to glow.

    Even it glows seperate ways, always know, you had me in a daze.

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    Weatherstone commented on Love can be so weak..

    12-06-2008

    One of your best, I think, great flow and use of picture language to "paint" your feelings and thoughts. A couple spelling errors to check: "tare" - "tear" and "gottah" - "gotta'", but other than that I really like this one.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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