Dreams

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    Dreams

    I had a dream, you held me tight,
    while sleeping next to you just last night.
    I had a dream, we were on the sand,
    just you and I walking hand in hand.
    I had a dream, you told me he loved me.
    I had a dream, you told me he cared.
    But as I awake, I noticed you weren't there.

    Dreams, Dreams will it come true.
    It matter up to me and you.

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    Blushes commented on Dreams

    03-19-2009

    I like this but at first it seems like you are talkin directly to this person and then near the end it seems like you were just dreaming it... it's a bit confusing.

    Weatherstone commented on Dreams

    12-06-2008

    I like this but work on it a bit more to hone it into a sharper image. Personally, I think self-editing is the hardest!!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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