Why?

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    Why?
    Why do I bother?
    Why do I care?
    Why am I always trying to be there?

    Is it because:
    I'm a friend in deed,
    always will to help a friend in need?

    Or is it just my fate?
    To never find that perfect soul mate.

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    optimistic commented on Why?

    07-11-2009

    Great ryhme in this poem a true love is one that comes around for all you just have to go thru the bad ink before you get the new, in my opinion you have a great style of poetry.
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    StandingBear commented on Why?

    07-11-2009

    A nicely written work relative to two fish in a fishbowl. One realizes the other whilst the other doesn't give back what is received. A true romantic you are. Great write.
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    modica3 commented on Why?

    07-01-2009

    SEEMS LIKE U BEEN THRU ALOT, HOPE THINGS GET BETTER FOR U; MAYBE U SHOULD TRAVEL MORE. SEEK THE WORLD AND BE STRESS FREE LIKE ME. SOMETIMES THINGS CAN BE HARD IN LIFE, JUST DON'T DEAL WITH IT AND MOVE ON. KEEP UR HEAD UP UR STILL YOUNG AND GOT ALOT TO LOOK FORWARD TO IN LIFE. MODICA3
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    wildpendigus commented on Why?

    06-10-2009

    I really like this poem beacuse it simple and this is a very good question that people should ask more frequently, because it it a mystery to a lot of people today it would be a good song if recorded, with right funk and rythmn. Congratulations grecowong@yahoo.com
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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