Vengence

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Dark inspiration just came to me...

Vengence

Crush my heart and make it bleed -
I have all I will ever need;
The knife you so conveniently placed,
Double-edged and poison laced,
Shall rend your head from shoulders high
And spray your blood to azure sky.
Go ahead and finish your little scheme;
Be fit to sleep sound and dream.
Do enjoy it while it lasts
Because the dice have already been cast,
And it is not in your favor, "friend" -
Everything must come to an end.

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Franziska commented on Vengence

10-16-2010

I love this, hehe. *rubs hands together* You can almost feel the malice and glee.

PoetsofBlood commented on Vengence

12-05-2009

Hun, this poem kicks ass, skillfully written, I really love it, :) Alexia....

Maleficent commented on Vengence

09-29-2009

Fantastic imagery and great flow. Love how it oozes darkness and malice. Really great write!

smaffa

09/29/2009

Thank you!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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