A Fish Out of Water

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This is just how it is right now.

A Fish Out of Water

I am a fish out of water, I  know not what to do;

life has been a circus since the day that I lost you.

I am not prepared for the planet that I ride,

It is snow and ice for winter and very cold outside.

 

A fish out of water and every gasp I take

makes my face turn blue as the water on the lake.

The bee in my bonnet is mostly caused by stress,

when I had you, life was easy, but today I am a mess.

 

A fish out of water, and a floppy fish I be,

‘till I find a new aquarium with pink and yellow-plastic trees.

                    Looking for Prince Charming, a fella just like you,

I am Cinderella; not just any prince will do.

 

When I  find  Mr. Charming who shall sweep me off my feet,

With love quite alarming, my young heart skips a beat,

He will be quite faithful and stick around like glue

I am a fish back in the water with a love that is true!

 

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BlackButterfly1 commented on A Fish Out of Water

07-10-2010

I understand how you feel! I especially like this line - "I am Cinderella; not just any prince will do." :-)

texaswriter

07/11/2010

I hate it when we're so picky!

Teardrops commented on A Fish Out of Water

06-30-2010

Love is a four letter word that once you find it its so hard to give up .He will come promise . Marie

texaswriter

06/30/2010

Thank you sweet Lady Marie, I really am needin' my Prince right now. Words of faith and encouragement are like water and air to me. I am encouraged. Thank you sooooooooooooo much!

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