The Blue Stone

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    Have you ever saved rocks? I saved a bowl full of them one time. But the most important one in the bowl was the one George found when we were together. He's passed now, but memory survives!

    The Blue Stone

    One early morning beachcomb

     

    I spied an unperfect round blue stone

     

    Now it sits upon my table

     

    Reminding me of the years we did roam.

     

    While looking on my table top,

     

    Piled with stones: I loved a lot,

     

    Among the white ones was the blue,

     

    A quiet whisper,

     

    “I love you.”

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    kdarcy commented on The Blue Stone

    07-21-2010

    Its most amazing that things of nature, even as an unperfect round blue stone can bind the spirit to the creator and the gifts of love given. Enjoyable read, be well
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    Teardrops commented on The Blue Stone

    07-14-2010

    Our was a song Garth Brooks if tommorow never comes i cant listen to it now . I crumble into tears great poem Jackie You rocked with this one a 10 for me Marie
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    BlackButterfly1 commented on The Blue Stone

    07-10-2010

    Oh...... this is so sweet. It's funny how nature has a way of connecting souls and keeping loved ones close, even when you're apart. Nice write.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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