Love Waits

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This poem is about someone I've never met yet. I hope it works. I'm tired of being single.

Love Waits

 

Until that day my love so sweet,
There's someone here, who thinks you're neat.
So worry not if I'll be there,
Don't be afraid or give a care.

I'll be awaitin' your next mailin'

And hopefully we'll be soon sailin'
Upon the stars that shine so high,
Our lonesome doves upon the sky.

So if you ever give a think,

About a girl in orange/pink,
Remember not to work too much,
'cuz she is waiting for your touch!

This poem I write now just for you,

In hopes that my lost dreams come true,
Blues Drummer man, I will dream
Of love and hope and wilder things.

The day will come when we'll both see,

If we are scared and run and flee,
Or if per chance, a favor shine,
That drummer boy will soon be mine.

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Teardrops commented on Love Waits

06-25-2010

I like this and hope your love knows and comes to your side . Great poem Marie

texaswriter

06/27/2010

Thanks for the encouraging and faith-filled replies, Marie. MY PRINCE AWAITS! BTW, my middle name is Marie. It's a great name!!!!

Teardrops

06/27/2010

Marie is a great name you are right i am glad you and I meet Marie

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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