Awakening

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    my thought on writing a poem or story.

    Awakening

    I held a seed in my hand
    I dropped it to grow
    In a darkened land

    It dropped as though
    Into a bottomless pit
    And in my center
    Is where it landed

    It reached out
    With strength unknown
    When it landed
    And I know that my words
    Will soon be unbounded.

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    Tigcateyes’s Poems (41)

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    Truth 5
    Thank You 1
    Dreams 0
    Lighted Windows 1
    I Am 0
    Hurt 0
    Today 0
    Once Upon A Time 0
    I Wish 0
    In Celebration Of You 0
    Forget Him 0
    Fleeting Encounters 0
    Done On Love 1
    Did You Ever? 0
    Describe my Love 0
    Change 0
    Behind Closed Doors 0
    Awakening 0
    A Baby's Love 0
    Worth it for the Ride 2
    Because of War, My Dear 5
    Used to Be's 2
    Almost Lost 1
    You Are A Winner 3
    Like An Eagle 1
    Time Is 2
    I Used To 0
    Take a Step Back in Time 0
    One Lone Star 1
    The Master's Touch 0
    I Think So 0
    Fuzzies 1
    Viking Lover 2
    Time in Love 1
    Memories of Jim-bo 0
    So Close 1
    No Sweeter 1
    Garden Dragons 0
    Reflections 1
    On the Hillside 1
    By the Light of the Moon 3