Fuzzies

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    This is one of my very first poems every written, somewhere around 11 years old.

    Fuzzies

    Fuzzies will gather for ever more
    Under the bed, behind the door
    Like thnder clouds they gather and grow
    My room they plan to over throw

    They float about like little gray ghost
    They keep to the shadows to avoid their hosts

                     Get the Vaccum!!
                      Get the Broom!!

    I think it's time to clean my room!

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    redbloodink commented on Fuzzies

    07-07-2010

    This was cute and funny......... red

    Tigcateyes

    07/07/2010

    thank you

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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