Done On Love

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    Don't be down on love, for love will come again.

    Done On Love

     Some people stay all alone and hide,
    They don't even want to know the reason why.
    They've given up on finding someone new,
    But new love comes, and it'll come for you.
    When true love comes, it will comfort you.

    Now you say you gotta broken heart,
    You ought to know love can leave you torn apart.
    So dry your eyes, cause your heart's gonna mend,
    And maybe tonight you'll fall in love again.

    I know new love seems so far away,
    Skies are cloudy, and tears come like falling rain.
    Face up to it, don't pretend, tonight you'll know,
    When love takes, only one heart cries.

    So don't be down on love,
    You know you're not the only one.
    See, I've been down in matters of the heart too.
    You better know before you start,
    You can't stay down on love.

    So, be prepared to be alone and a little scared,
    But, don't be down on love.

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    jtlove commented on Done On Love

    07-25-2010

    What is love by definiton? Define it so I won't be down on it. Because real love sounds like a good thing. But unfortunately that is not what we usually bring.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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