BEAUTIFUL BARREN (ODE TO THE ARCTIC AND ALASKA)

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  • queenrosered
  • Waiting for escrow to close on our new house in Vegas...will still visit Mexico often! Sorry I've been away so long from this site! Great to be "home" :D

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This was a challenge poem written in 2005, but I feel that it reflects the land and the beauty of the barreness. I hope you can enjoy it, thanks so much.

BEAUTIFUL BARREN (ODE TO THE ARCTIC AND ALASKA)

In a barren land forgotten,

In a place where no one goes,

 Far from sunlit fields of cotton,

 Is a land only God knows.

 Land of midnight sun it's called,

 Where pregnant moon hangs overhead

 No summer, spring nor even fall;

 Like no place else on earth `tis said.

 Some praise leaves in autumn's splendor,

 While others raise a toast to spring.

 But the barren beauty this land renders

 Is the most impressive sight e'er seen.

 In this barren land forgotten,

 In this place where nothing grows,

 Lies this concept, misbegotten,

 Under gently drifting floes.

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Charlie23 commented on BEAUTIFUL BARREN (ODE TO THE ARCTIC AND ALASKA)

01-22-2010

I'm not into nature poems usually, but I absolutely love this one! Left me pondering if I understood the allegory that it was meant to tell! Very well written! Exceptional poem!

queenrosered

01/22/2010

Thanks so much Charlie! Your comments are truly appreciated my friend! Peace and Love, Rose XD

SavVySam commented on BEAUTIFUL BARREN (ODE TO THE ARCTIC AND ALASKA)

01-21-2010

Beautiful and so true! I enjoyed the twist in theme, from the usual suspects in favor. If you are so inclined, please check out Child of fire. Thanks for sharing this!

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks so much again Savvy, and Im on my way there now, tyvm! Peace and Love, Rose. XD

queenrosered commented on BEAUTIFUL BARREN (ODE TO THE ARCTIC AND ALASKA)

01-21-2010

Thanks again Angel! Much appreciated, as always! Love, Rose! XD

HeavenlyAngel commented on BEAUTIFUL BARREN (ODE TO THE ARCTIC AND ALASKA)

01-21-2010

i love this!!! very nice flow and descriptive... takes me there. tx

Vincent commented on BEAUTIFUL BARREN (ODE TO THE ARCTIC AND ALASKA)

01-20-2010

This poem flows as if it was water flowing down a stream. Peaceful and hypnotic. Smiles Vincent

queenrosered

01/20/2010

Thanks so much Vincent! How sweet of you (love ur smile!) XD

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.