half-sleep

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half-sleep

Poets will write
that a dream might be
‘marching’ away
almost implying it was
going slowly enough and
you still had time
to catch it.

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monkyntz commented on half-sleep

11-25-2009

another 10 i think of all the dreams i could never catch great write an enjoyable read

Phatom commented on half-sleep

06-12-2009

I guess it's the beauty of being in a coma-striken condition, but i guess we would all like to dream awake, image what kind of world that would be.....

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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