what's that you say moonlight?

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    what's that you say moonlight?

    dance in the wake of your beams that grace the frost covered lawns of life in my bare feet laughing the laugh of my six year old soul that dreams in comet tails and starlight; skip along the milky way path that graces the heaven of my imagination…being…just be-ing one as you wrap your silvery white glow in and out of my toes and fingertips and caress my mermaid hair all tangled from the day’s play with the wind, with bits of tattered fallen leaves of golden, red and orange creating a halo of hope as my crowning glory…

    gladly, my love

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    optimistic commented on what's that you say moonlight?

    07-27-2009

    Woo! the very detailed description of your poem, and then the places I put on the breaks held me longer, this line right here, dance in the wake of your beams that grace the frost covered lawns of life, courages beautiful.
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    nightsky commented on what's that you say moonlight?

    07-02-2009

    Living in the words with a title capturing the shadow, as the poem skips ahead. Delicious magic!
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    Tempestlady commented on what's that you say moonlight?

    06-16-2009

    I loved it. Such a beautiful mastery of words and dreams and feelings. Very poignant, and flowing like curtains in the wind. You have a gift. Write on
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    Stark commented on what's that you say moonlight?

    04-27-2009

    Great imagery.
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    simplypeace commented on what's that you say moonlight?

    04-02-2009

    this is wonderful. love this!
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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