when my soul danced
i remember your
eyes; sanctuaries of warmth
enveloping me.
eyes; sanctuaries of warmth
enveloping me.
when my soul danced
3 Comments
Tags: Lost Love
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wildpendigus commented on when my soul danced
06-25-2009
- I thimnk this is one of your better poems, could be a short song and story line could turn out very nice since I produce and write I can hear drums, rythmn section as real funky groove, good luck! grecowong@yahoo.com
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06/25/2009
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Stark commented on when my soul danced
04-27-2009
- Yes! I finally found someone else on here who wrote a haiku :) Also, this rocks. Simple, elegant, encompasses a nice message, and I like how the title can work as a line of the poem.
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dahlusion commented on when my soul danced
01-05-2009
- I will think of you when I sit awake at night… the simplicity of this one is like a literary avalanche
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