If I could, I would

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  • jerseycrtz
  • Your the one for me, and I'm the one for you, take the both of us and we're the perfect two. <3

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:( I really wish I could. If you want to see what the picture says and why I picked it for this poem here is the link: http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=20560&id=100001344103851&saved#!/photo.php?pid=73780&id=100001344103851&ref=fbx_album let me know if it doesnt work.

If I could, I would

There are so many things
I would say to you
if I could.

If I could, I would let you talk
and get all your anger out
so you didn't have to take it out on your arms.

If I could, I would tell you about
all the thoughts I have about you
and how big of a crush I have on you.

If I could, I would comment on that status you made
talking about how you hate your life
and tell you all the blessings you have.

If I could, I would show you all the poems i've made
that are dedicated to you
and you would see how big of an impact you've made on me.

If I could, I would talk to your family
and see how much they really know about what you do
and figure out why you dont like them.

If I could, I would tell you
how your life on this Earth is so important to so many people
and how many people worry about you every day.

If I could, I would let you know that I am one of those people
who care about your thoughts, dreams, and hopes
and show you how much I love you.

I wish you could see
that if I could, I really and sincerely would
but with how we are now
I can't.

Can we please change that?

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FranzJ commented on If I could, I would

08-29-2010

its hard to comment without knowing anything about you- just tell that person how you feel

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

jerseycrtz’s Poems (61)

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Depression 1
Perfection 0
I Wish 0
Until I forget about you 0
This is What you Get 0
Is The Reason 1
I'm Happy 2
I could make you happier 2
Oh No. 1
I'm tired of Worrying about You 2
My Barbed Wire Fence 1
You may not like me 1
If I could, I would 1
This Face Of Happiness 0
How Much You Mean To Me 1
Hide yourself from others 2
My Silent Tears of Pain 2
Finding My Love 0
Let the darkness swallow me 0
He's what I need right now 0
Guilty Pleasure 1
Wish Upon A Star 0
I like someone I shouldnt 0
A Broken Heart Speaks 1
My Tale of Our "Love" 1
The Tears of Desperation 2
You Are My Voice 1
He's mine 4
Feeling Alone Without You 1
Value Who You Are 1
Somebody Help Me 2
My Peaceful Night for You 0
They Want to Know 0
My Mystery Man 2
My Friends and Her 6
This just might be Love 1
Things are good for everyone-but me 2
What Other People Think 1
Love You 0
Boys! 1
I think I love him 0
My Lost Love 1
Why do you do this? 0
What did I do? 1
You Know Your In Love if.... 4
2 Young Girls Love 1
I Love Him 0
Waiting for love to pass 0
I'm Not Ready To Let Go 0
I want to be free 0
Poetry 0
Never let you see me cry 1
Breathe 1
Hopelessness 0
Laughter ruined 0
The Darkness 1
What if I haven't? 1
Suicide 0
something you couldn't have 1
I know what your thinking 0
heartbeat 0