man made

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    man made

    i want to write
    a poem here
    but it seems tonight
    i have only tears

    all of them
    seem the same
    sad poems
    that dont explain

    only emotions
    on a piece of paper
    love potions
    that say i care

    all sad
    all afraid
    all mad
    all man made

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    dml7788 commented on man made

    05-19-2009

    very interesting concept, some misses like "that don't explain" - explain what exactly? but overall its pretty nice poem

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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