take a look at me now

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    take a look at me now

    remember when you used to hold me
    remember when i used to smile
    remember when i loved you and i would stay up for hours
    remember when you were mine
    remember when i was yours
    remember it all then forget it all cuz it's gone and your out of my life

    take a look at me now
    take a look at what i'm doing
    take a look at me now
    take a look at where i'm going
    when i walked out of your life
    and left you behind
    i started mine

    remember when i looked in your eyes
    remember when you id paralyze
    remember when i called and say how much i need you
    remember when i stayed up all night
    remember when we had the fight
    remember it all then forget it all cuz its gone and your out of my life

    take a look at me now
    take a look at what i'm doing
    take a look at me now
    take a look at where i'm going
    when i walked out of your life
    and left you behind
    i started mine

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    WhiteKnight commented on take a look at me now

    05-26-2009

    now this poem is kick ass. shoes women empowerment. and that you don't need some one to be happy. happiness comes from with in? Whiteknight

    Penname commented on take a look at me now

    05-25-2009

    Set it to music and you'll have a hit. Just change the name because Phil Collins already did a song by that title.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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