take a look at me now

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    take a look at me now

    remember when you used to hold me
    remember when i used to smile
    remember when i loved you and i would stay up for hours
    remember when you were mine
    remember when i was yours
    remember it all then forget it all cuz it's gone and your out of my life

    take a look at me now
    take a look at what i'm doing
    take a look at me now
    take a look at where i'm going
    when i walked out of your life
    and left you behind
    i started mine

    remember when i looked in your eyes
    remember when you id paralyze
    remember when i called and say how much i need you
    remember when i stayed up all night
    remember when we had the fight
    remember it all then forget it all cuz its gone and your out of my life

    take a look at me now
    take a look at what i'm doing
    take a look at me now
    take a look at where i'm going
    when i walked out of your life
    and left you behind
    i started mine

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    WhiteKnight commented on take a look at me now

    05-26-2009

    now this poem is kick ass. shoes women empowerment. and that you don't need some one to be happy. happiness comes from with in? Whiteknight

    Penname commented on take a look at me now

    05-25-2009

    Set it to music and you'll have a hit. Just change the name because Phil Collins already did a song by that title.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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