My wish

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    • dragongarcia
    • Losing everything I loved but trying to keep going

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    This poem came to me but I have no clue why

    My wish
    my wish
    if I could wish upon a star
    if my wish would be granted 
    I'd wish with all my heart
    to be good enough to be loved
    if I blew out a candle and wished
    if my wish would come true
    I'd wish with all my might 
     i wasnt a waste of any kind 
    if I blew on that wishing flower
    if my wish would be heard
    I'd wish and blow with all my hope
    to be useful at something
    if a shooting star came past my sight
     if God would give me this blessing 
    I'd wish with everything I am
    to be worthy of being happy
    but no wish could I wish
    that could be at all achievable 
    because my wishes go unanswered 
    because they r my wishes 
    if I could wish upon a star
    if my wish would be granted 
    I'd wish with all my heart
    to be good enough to be loved

    if I blew out a candle and wished
    if my wish would come true
    I'd wish with all my might 
    i wasnt a waste of any kind 

    if I blew on that wishing flower
    if my wish would be heard
    I'd wish and blow with all my hope
    to be useful at something

    if a shooting star came past my sight
    if God would give me this blessing 
    I'd wish with everything I am
    to be worthy of being happy

    but no wish could I wish
    that could be at all achievable 
    because my wishes go unanswered 
    because they are my wishes 

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