One shot

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One shot

All it takes is one shot to get hooked

One shot to get lost

In the forest of demons

Lose yourself here and you won’t be found

Until it’s too late and you’re out of time

To waste away and linger in the past

With the ghosts of your troubles

And the beasts of your problems

They’ll eat you alive

If you hold them inside

Let your feelings go

Let them out

Cry, scream, race away

Don’t hide behind a fascade

Let your feelings show through your eyes

And your pain will be less

As the years go by.

 

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Phoenix9 commented on One shot

08-15-2009

WOW I am impressed by your talent , you have brought forth so much in this one, the raw emotion of life and how to survive.keep up the great words

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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