RAGAMUFFIN

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UPA OTF CHALLENGE SET BY KOCHAB/FAVORITE PET

RAGAMUFFIN

My favorite pet I did not have,
while growing up.

It was as an adult,
I received my pup.

A mop of a yorky.

To some he looked kind of dorky.

To me he was a true friend,

it seemed his love,
would never end.

I was his favorite of all the family.

We spent our days together,

very companionably.

His mommas name was muffin.

So I called him my little,

ragamuffin.

When I was in the hospital,
we were apart.

Not seeing him everyday,
broke my heart.

Nothing could have made me feel more loved,

then when I came home,
and he flew into my arms like a dove.

Alas I had to send him away.

it broke my heart,
I cried all day.

but house trained he would not get.

So, hubby said;

say goodbye to your pet.

I cried for days at the loss of my,
nonjudgmental friend.

I'd give anything,
to have him back again.

 

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knight4696 commented on RAGAMUFFIN

01-27-2010

Angel! :( Here's an E-Hug! (((((((Angel))))))) Heartbreaking tale but very nice poem. :) Ken

Brad1 commented on RAGAMUFFIN

10-02-2009

Awwwww ragamuffin! I just teared up. Is your hubby housebroken? lol. Very pleasant read am2anangel. Loved it. So who got raga?

MrGee commented on RAGAMUFFIN

09-26-2009

Poor muffin is gone! the poem paints a good picture. HOw old was muffin? I had a West Highland white terrier and he lived to be 18yrs old and died of a heart attack in my arms. I miss him alot. I am a sucker for doggies and this poem about muffin is so sweet. i think I will give it a 10 based on the fact that I love doggies

kochab commented on RAGAMUFFIN

09-26-2009

very good work am. My only suggestion as far as improving would go would be to be a bit more attentive to line spacing to better form your stanzas. Disrupting that can disrupt the flow of your poem or change its direction entirely to the reader. Other than that, excellent work babes

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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