"SEVEN"

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    "SEVEN"

    On May seven I came to be

    On the seventh day God rested and then created me

    When God made me he was just showin’ off

    A perfect specimen of a man, nothin’ about me is soft

    Before I was formed I was told

    “You will be a well bred man before you get old”

    To this day I hold my head up high

    Even though life hands me a lemon at times; I'll never sigh

    I’d add water and sugar and make some lemon-aid

    Back then I had my own stand and got paid

    There is an angel missin’ in Heaven

    He came to Earth and named himself "Seven"

    B. Alan "Seven" Williams--Aug 2010

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    1990lh commented on "SEVEN"

    10-14-2010

    lmao ( hahahaah.ect.) i bet your head is bigger than the red queen in alice in wonderland. " There is an angel missin’ in Heaven He came to Earth and named himself "Seven" hahaha super funny arrogant or not your words are still the sh*t. hah. hugs
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    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    Hahaha....Thanx my lil booger-head sis

    1990lh

    01/14/2013

    LMAO..This is really some funny shit hahaha....I had to read this again. hahaha

    WordManipulator commented on "SEVEN"

    08-26-2010

    there you go again, blowing your own horn. dont let your head get too big or cant wear you hat anymore, hehe. nice write 7
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    SEVEN

    10/25/2010

    I'll try not to let it out grow yours.....hehe

    oleans commented on "SEVEN"

    08-17-2010

    WHAT A WONDERFUL POME I AM INPRESS I THINK U R GOOD THANKX OLEANS
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    SEVEN

    08/18/2010

    Thanx for the commy....I can only get better

    Teardrops commented on "SEVEN"

    08-17-2010

    I like the poem and if we can blow our own horn then who will . Great write my friend Marie
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    SEVEN

    08/18/2010

    Well only I can blow this horn to the right tune,,,,wink,....thanx for the commy

    girlygirl1234 commented on "SEVEN"

    08-17-2010

    wow seven this is a truly amazing piece. i think this might be the first time i read any of your poems. and i like it
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    SEVEN

    08/18/2010

    Thanx for the commy.....and feel free to browse the rest of my poems

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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    BACK THEN 8 08/19/2010
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    You're Grown? 4 08/19/2010
    Lil' Miss Suzie May 2 08/19/2010
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    "SEVEN" 6 08/17/2010
    FIRST FLIGHT 9 08/12/2010
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    t2    		 2 12/19/2009
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    t1    		 3 12/19/2009
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    Deja-Vu 1 12/01/2009
    KEN 1 09/16/2009
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    Pray and Pray Again 1 12/01/2009
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