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    • Amber041792
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     Tell me why I live my life like this. Why do I go around not trusting anyone? I grew up around lies and hardship. I've moved around so much that I just never unpack anymore. I know once I unpack everything, I will just have to up and go again. Never staying in one place. I've bounced from person to person where I never know what to say. When I start to trust and accept I just leave. I've learned to not open up to anyone and to think of just living from day to day. Show me how to open up and trust everyone I love and know. Show me how I can forget my past and start a new life. I want to tell you everything, but something is stopping me. I just don't know what it is though. Tell me how to show my true self to the world.

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    MalikPeterson commented on Show me

    03-13-2010

    I was actually just having this conversation with someone the other day about moving around because his father works for a company that moves them every four years. Then we got started talking about the people that move every year and how hard it may be for them. The solution was the internet lol. But this can also be viewed as a metaphor for moving from one event in life to the next...and never freeing yourself from the past event...which in turn affects every new event you may find yourself partaking in...or not partaking in because of your past. A very interesting topic you have touched on. Maybe I am over thinking...or maybe I am just going under the surface...lol...good job though.
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    Amber041792

    03/15/2010

    That is a very good view on it. For this one, I was just thinking about everything in my life and stuff and this is what came out. I didn't think about it that way, but that is a very good way of thinking it. Thanks:)

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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