The time
before the night

Takes hold
of my mind
The world cloaked
In it's darkness.

Sweet sensation
subtle purfume
The stars.

Oh how i wish
they were more
than just,
bubbling gas balls.

Too many wishes wasted,
On those stupid stars.
I put my trust
In those stars.

That my wishes
would come true.
"Enjoy the twilight little one
because the darkness is coming"


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lonewolf162 commented on Twilight


aww thats sweet keep going ur realy good keep it up

poetheart87 commented on Twilight


This is different from your other writes. But it is still awesome. I loved it. You definitely have a great talent and I hope that you don't waste it. Keep on writing.

cliftondurant commented on Twilight


enjoy the light because there are some darkness in life the old saying take the good with the bad great job Frazel

bigguy commented on Twilight


NO little lady,,,the sun also rises to kiss the dawn away and keep us forever hopeful for tomorrow. Papa

Rainz commented on Twilight


It is always darkest before dawn, my dear. Great work!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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