Twilight

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Twilight

Twilight
The time
before the night


Takes hold
of my mind
The world cloaked
In it's darkness.


Sweet sensation
subtle purfume
The stars.


Oh how i wish
they were more
than just,
bubbling gas balls.


Too many wishes wasted,
On those stupid stars.
I put my trust
In those stars.


That my wishes
would come true.
"Enjoy the twilight little one
because the darkness is coming"

 

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lonewolf162 commented on Twilight

12-25-2009

aww thats sweet keep going ur realy good keep it up

poetheart87 commented on Twilight

11-18-2009

This is different from your other writes. But it is still awesome. I loved it. You definitely have a great talent and I hope that you don't waste it. Keep on writing.

cliftondurant commented on Twilight

10-26-2009

enjoy the light because there are some darkness in life the old saying take the good with the bad great job Frazel

bigguy commented on Twilight

10-26-2009

NO little lady,,,the sun also rises to kiss the dawn away and keep us forever hopeful for tomorrow. Papa

Rainz commented on Twilight

10-26-2009

It is always darkest before dawn, my dear. Great work!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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