a familiar stranger

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    a familiar stranger

    you are so the furthest from my mind
    that just this very moment
    i have come to find
    that i never knew you were in there at all.
    and who again exactly are you?
    i'd really like to........, NO!, never mine.
    you are certainly not on my mind.

               tyke

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    knight4696 commented on a familiar stranger

    10-02-2009

    Tyke - I Like this one a lot. I like the self questioning ... and the title is great -it fits the poem so well! Good job!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    tykehall’s Poems (43)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    My Simpler Thoughts On You 3
    Feeling Acquainted,Ar
    e We?
    1
    I Love You 2
    love? 1
    silver bird dove 1
    if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether 3
    love for some, play for others 1
    final dimension 2
    and the answer is...........
    .....
    1
    the scout made to pout 1
    little roy screw 1
    he did me father 2
    rising to the occasion 2
    ( day dreaming ), with eyes wide opened 1
    a familiar stranger 1
    and still i can believe in him 1
    just a quickie 2
    my dearest 2
    a stand 1
    self realization 1
    coping with composure 2
    parting past 2
    sparks 3
    the space your absence fills 2
    looking out at the world from the belly of a wolf 2
    inside the ride 1
    life's savings 1
    pursuing my dreams 2
    the yin and the yang 1
    pook's lullaby 1
    just a thought at hand 1
    happily married 4
    orchid midnight 1
    just friends; and then? 1
    one branch (observation) 1
    you, sharing me;who cares? 1
    sing, memorabilia, sing 1
    floating hearts 1
    waiting (is something i can do) for him 3
    a revealed vision of love 1
    trick of the trade 2
    a superb absurdity (did occur to me) 1
    p.i.m. entry 11/28/04 2